April 8, 2016

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It is estimated that there are currently over thirteen million children under the age of five that die from illnesses that could have been easily treated (“Right to Healthcare around the Globe).
This program will be targeted for users that are in areas that lack resources.
Currently, in order to aid countries or areas, we need to spend a lot of resources to get doctors across the globe, in working order, with some sort of medical facility.
So why choose an automated program over a medical professional?
The program will be operated based on two main users: the patient and an administrator.
One of the biggest challenges that must be overcome is the relationship and connection between software engineers and medical professionals.

A machine learning AI used to create an automated medical diagnosis would close the gap between many areas.

Reading this made me realize that my initial plan for the progression of the paper did not match what I ended up writing. I can now clearly see the progression of ideas I want, and I have added paragraphs that I realized were missing. 

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